Good show, and I like the way you write in the end, where you take it easy and not leaving a high cliff. Good for my philosophy.
The introduction of the characters were imagineable like a movie. So I suppose that was a hole in 1. I have yet to see the outcome of this story.

Author's Response: Thank you, that's my proof to the world that I do not end every chapter on a cliffhanger (though I tend to). And I'm glad the outcome is murky because I made sure not to give any details away in these first three chapters. Thanks for the good review.

Author's Response: Btw, everyone, I'm not updating til you all get back from Christmas break or wherever you've gone off to. How do I know you've gone? Because the only person reviewing stories now at all is Takashi and one or two others. Sorry you guys! Consider the next chapter a Christmas/New Years present. And look on the bright side: I'll get more done this way.

I'm reviewing, of course. :P Well, you state this Sharpe fellow as young in narrative, but in speech, he sounds older. I like it, though. He sounds like quite an interesting character. The end was nice, too. No suggestions. This was great. ^^

Author's Response: Excellent, that was my intention (the young/old thing I mean) Glad you picked up on that. I was worried sometihng happened to you for a second...usually you're the first (and sometimes the only one) in line to review. So glad to see you're okay *smirk*

Oops my bad Sharpe I meant Sharpe

Author's Response: Heh, no big deal.

wooooo Shadsie's got a lawyer! Granit he seems a bit....forcefull...but it's a lawyer none the less!

Author's Response: A bit forceful? Heh...you haven't got a clue...