At least Sonics siblings are not phycho like his mother! Keep up hope Shadow you will prevail! XD
Author's Response:Love shall prevail! X3
I dont care if shes Sonics mother! I will kill her! DX
Author's Response:We'll do it together!
Weell both know and are together now, but I sense family troubles on the horizon. (Not to metion that Sally has just been spurned twice XD)
I love this new chapter! Though I was expecting it to end with Aleena giving either Sonic or Shadow a wtf face once they mentioned Sonic was pregnant and demanded an explanation...but that would have so ruined the high note of happiness at the end of chapter. Great job as always.
Author's Response:Thank you, but Aleena isn't quite finished yet. *Hint* *Hint* ^^
This story is just getting better and better; and why is Tails always forgotten.
Oh, and in the 34th paragraph you have a typo. You wrote miss understanding, proper names are always supposed to be capitalized, so it should be Miss Understanding. ...Or it could just be a single word with one less S, misunderstanding.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:Thanks for pointing out the typo for me. I try to catch all of them, but... yeah... If you see anymore in the future, would it be okay if you pointed them out for me? Thanks. :)
Oh and I'm glad you like the story! Thanks a lot for your constant support!
Its alright Tails you have to remember that they are dealing with a lot right now. :P
Author's Response:^^
LOL Next chapter please! My first thought after the last line was "Oh sh1t!" Is Shadow gonna go hide in his room now?
Author's Response:I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can. :3
Leave it to Rouge to make it all better...and Knuckles to mess it all up. And talk about timing!
Just a quick thing that's been bugging me, isn't ARC actually spelled with a 'K'? Other than that everything appears to be in check as well.
Author's Response:It is spelled with a K, but I wanted it to be spelled ARC. Not sure why, I just thought it looked better. Something different. X3
Is he gonna tell! Do it Tails you know you want to! XD Is Sonic gonna find out about it but not know hes the father? And if Sally finds out, I see much chaos in the future! XD
Oh my gosh, the pole of doom makes an appearance, and I wouldn't think Sally would have a crush on Shadow; I'll admit that really gave me a wtf moment, I was expecting Sonic to come clean in that situation.
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