Ah, damnit, Shadow, why can't you just open you eyes already?! And, Sonic, I don't blame you...BUT WTF WERE YOU THINKING WHEN YOU PUNCHED SHADOW IN THE STOMACH?!?! (btw, I know why) Alright. So I expected this to happen. Also about the Sally loving Shadow, thing, but I WASN'T expecting the kiss. So great job on that. Awesome chapter, and nice job, Silvy. 10/10

PS: I feel bad for Tails...Don't make his life a living hell, he's suffering enough already! (from Sonic's annoying attitude? Or maybe just that annoying pole...)

PPS: I screamed a bit for a while before reading the chapter, so now you know why I hadn't reviewed earlier. But also aside from my compute just shuting down RIGHT before I was about to submit this review, so I had to retype it again. Also that my internet just crashed...Darn you, bad luck! >:(

Ah, well. Looks like I'll have to deal with a cliffy again...So...Sonia has a crush on Shadow? I dunno, but it looks like it. And I do wonder...What will Sally do? And what was Queen Aleena about to say? (Don't answer it. Just answer it by updating, please!) This story is just plain awesome, and I will tell you now, you are a great writer. I mean, sure, you've got to have SOME things to have to work on, but come on! You're a great writer. And as you said to me before, don't stop writing. EVER. 9/10

Author's Response:

You'll have to deal with the cliffy for awhile since my birthday is in two days. I'm not going to write anything since I'm so busy right now (Since my best friend's birthday is the day after mine. X3). Thanks for the great reviews! I'll keep writing! (If I don't get writers block -_-)

Oh Sonic, it's no big deal all.  You were just blubbering like a baby when you got home and got snot and tears all over your bed cover and Shadow was nice enough to wash it for you.  He stayed that night simply because you were such a wreck and we all know Shadow is such a nice guy.  I know you may have used half a tissue box, but trust me, I didn't know someone could cry so hard.

I can't wait for the next chapter, I check this site like twice a day just to see if this or He is My Master have been updated.  Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

I'm kind of surprised people accually like this story. ^_^' I'm not very good with writing stories with drama, and fluff. But thanks! I'll keep working hard!

SILVEREXORCIST!!! How DARE you leave us with just that to work with?! *After a few minutes* This is so awesome! When I saw that you've updated, I was like 'YAY!!! Silvy updated!' (I know. Silvy s a weird name)

Mistakes:

“and lo and behold you came out of your cave when you thought I was long gone huh?” Did you mean 'LOW and behold?'

“What were you doing all night? Thinking of multiple ways that make my life even more hell?” Did you mean 'more LIKE hell'?

But, yeah, that's it. And please update soon, along with a phrase that almost everyone uses 'keep up the good work!' 9/10