Aww.... is pretty much what I want to surmise this piece to be, giving me nice, fuzzy feelings inside. I blank out with my loved one as well, and can relate to this so much! Thank you for help showing the populace that sonadow is not simply a hardcore, sex-driven yaoi. Also, think you for making a fluff piece that isn't based off a song either, those can actually be quite grating on my nerves. You get a 9 out of 10!
I saw a couple mistakes but they weren't big. :) Sorry for not reviewing before, you can mostly find me a fanfiction.net; I spend most of my time there... I wish I could write like this, I can never do the whole 'one person thinking' thing. So, great story! I really like it! :)
Author's Response:Thanks so much! And, yeah, I noticed mistakes. To me, they were a lot...And I got so excited when you reviewed! I was like 'oh my god, he/she actually reviewed my story!!!' Yeah, I think of you as an amazing writer. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! If I have time, I might edit it, but I'm just so laaaazy...
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