Poor Sonic, just giving birth and already feeling outgrown. Hope Mary turns out to be very loving and cuddly
Both excited for the last, and sad it's ending
Author's Response:Yeah, I know... The last chapter's going to be interesting, and I hope it leaves everyone fulfilled.
Whoa, intense. Thank goodness Shads got his memory back ^-^
With an equivalent three month old, that had to feel pretty agonizing. Adding insult to injury, the ending was pretty sad feeling-still awesome though. I can hardly wait for this grand finale you're talking about, either! >w
Author's Response:Yeah this chapter was a set up for the finale, heh. I've worked really hard on the last chapter and it's really going to be something I hope people really enjoy.
im going to be so sad when this story is over! but at the same time i cant wait to see how it will end! all in all this story is fantastic and i plan on reading it again and again even after it s all done! poor Sonic though! wonder how this situation will play out and im so glad that she at least has Sonic's eyes! you are a fantastic writer and i hope you continue to write more stories as i will fallow them all! cant wait till the last ch! (even know i am and will anywase!) oh! and one more thing! puting Sonic's name as Shadow's trigger, friggen ingeniouse! so happy that he got his memery back in time for Mary's birth!
Author's Response:I am so happy you really enjoyed this story! I worked so hard on it and it brings a smile on my face to see that people really found it a great read. I really hope the last chapter is worth the wait and thanks so much for your words of approval. They mean so much!
Shadow turned sweet again, YAY! I actually was just wondering if he even knew sonic's name
Author's Response:Sonic will always be able to get through Shad's defenses ^.~ Yeah, I was wondering if anyone caught on ^^
Whoa, only two more chapters? ...Looking back, I see how many you've posted so far. So that's how long it's been since this started...wow, it doesn't seem like that long to me. X3
A lovely cutesy chapter, it was delightful. I loved the ending. And no, I didn't even noticed you'd never used Sonic's name since the incident XD
Author's Response:It doesn't seem that long to me either ^^ Glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'm to subtle with things, I swear ^^'
My feels are confused XD
The beginning was sweet, I liked it very much. The middle was /hot/, I loved that part. Shads and his 'Ultimate' senses, guess that includes hearing too. The ending mellowed back into the lovey stuff, and I think that part was one of the best! Shows that Shadow still cares, makes me very happy. Amazing work as always, I think I caught your double meaning there ;)
Can't wait until next upload!! >w
Author's Response:I'm glad this chapter had such an affect XD And yeah the ending was really one of my favorite parts ^^ I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
A beautiful ending for the chap. It remarkable how much one's heart can remember, when the mind cannot
Author's Response:Yes I know. Really it's my favorite part of the chapter for me ^^
OMG poor Sonic. That´s really hard for him.
I think it´s a boy ^^
Author's Response:Yeah I know.
I wonder if the gender will be a surprise or not to people...
Holy /shoot/, I wasn't expecting that. I figured you'd turn it around somehow, figuring the nature of the story, but wow, I wasn't prepared for another feels trip. XD
Regarding the last chapter, I didn't actually think Mephi was down just like that...I thought he would pop up with a "fooled you!", but your chapter end notes made me feel better about it. ^^'
Don't think I'm talking bad, I'm not trying to. These last two chapters really kept me on my toes, and caught me off guard more than once! Once again, wonderful work!
Author's Response:Well, I'm really glad I was able to keep you on your toes. These past two chapters were definitely meant to be that way. I like hearing your thoughts on the chapters! It makes me feel like I'm actually doing something right :)
wow that was exiting! for a second i thought Sonic was going to trancform into Dark Sonic! but thank goodness that Shadows still alive! and it seems like Scourge has a thing for Amy! maybe he is the one that is ment for her! man this chapter was intence! i already cant wait for the next chapter and i hope that Sonic is ok! you are absolutly amazing and a fantastic writer!
Author's Response:Thanks! I was hoping this chapter would be pretty intense due to the circumstances. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far. Be prepared becaues next week's chapter presents a twist ^_~
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