Good! Now......bring on the next chapter!

Alright, the story's good, the plot is good and all, but please don't make Sonic pregnant. I've seen that plot a lot of times and I'll hate to have your story become part of the mass.
I have a little idea that you can use instead; why not make someone stubble upon Sonic and Scourge and stop it before it goes too far? After all, they are inside a club, it would be illogical for someone not to hear the screaming. I think you should make Sonic traumatized by this event, and the plot should continue with Shadow trying to heal him from his trauma.
Anyways, great story, it's has a unique twist with Sonic not having met Shadow before he went into exile. Keep going!

Author's Response:

To soothe your concerns, Sonic will not end up having Scourge's kid. That was never my intention. There's so much more to this story, I just didn't want to give anything away yet. Thanks for the ideas, but I don't plan on having this story centeted around this one moment if that's what you're worried about.

Aw, that was so cute! Great work, you've really got their characters down in this story.
These are a lot of updates since last month, more than most authors on this site make in a year. I've got a lot of reading time ahead of me! X3

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! You really think I have them in character? I worried that I wasn''t doing so well with that, espicially with where the story is going. I update every week, so you'll definitely have something to read for a while ^_^

Ok, this story is getting sweet. Very nice.

Author's Response:

Thanks~ I appreciate the review ^_^

Wow, this sounds like a pretty awesome story! I can hardly wait to read more! >.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I do hope you enjoy what I have planned for this story ^_^