Huh... sounds like Sonic maybe was ... I mean the heat wearing off early, and feeling clingy, then bleeding from a blow to his gut... ...baby??
Author's Response:I'm not at liberty to answer yes or no...
But those pieces do seem to fit, huh?Thanks for the review!
Cool action! I like the soft cliffhanger, very professional
Author's Response:Thank you! ^_^
A bit shorter than usual, but good progress. Cool! I was right about Cosmo being the third chaos. Can't wait for more action!!
Author's Response:Yep! I hope you'll enjoy the chapters to come as the action and really start to come into play.
Thanks for the review!
1. Epic lemon.
2. Eggman flipping out was hilarious~!
3. Uh oh, wonder if Knux aol explain more of the prophecy... and hope Tails n Cosmo don't get attacked in AquaticRuin
4. Still loving more with every chap
Author's Response:1. Thanks :3
2. Yeah, I really did have a kick out of writing Egghead's reaction XD
3. Hmm... We'll just have to see...
4. Seriously, thanks! I'm glad you're loving the story!
Aw, appropriate level of fluff achieved. Wonder if Sonic's extra warmth is a foreboding of the prophecy...?
And I love Shads going all soft for Cosmo! Always kinda pictured that
Author's Response: Thanks! The fluff in this chapter was nice to right and I'm happy you enjoyed it. I always kind of pictured Shadow being nice to Cosmo as well which is why I thought it would be good to put in their. Thanks for reviewing! Next chapter should be a good one.
Cool fight! Wasn't expecting robots to teleport.
Aw, Cosmo and Tails are soo cute! Hope egg-face leaves them alone...
Author's Response:Oh, thanks! Yeah, have to be kept on one's toes in battle. I'm happy you liked the two! I wasn't sure if I did them justice. I can't say whether or not he will...
Thanks for the review!
Really like the progress our boys have made! And all the referencing of the game levels, really makes me nostalgic for the old games ;)
My only question right now would be, maybe a little more description in their traveling speed? Sometimes I thing they're walking but then it reads like their running through the zone, and I double-take... but it's not bad or anything, I still completely love this story!!
Author's Response: I'm glad the nostalgia can be felt with this story. Sonic 2 & 3 are my favorites :) I'll take a look at the description soon. Thanks for mentioning it. Thank you for your continued support ^_^
Yay, first compromise between the couple. Proud of Tails too, 'way to go blondie!' Can't wait to see how knuckles reacts
Author's Response:I definitely like to give Tails his moments, he deserves them :) Yes, next chapter should be interesting, what with the two having finally decided to work together and heading off to Angel Island.
Thanks so much for the review ^_^
Yay, another good action course. You totally have the talent to be more confident about writing those scenes. And all the couple tension and feels in this one, felt my heart pang, really. LOVE IT!!
Author's Response: Yeah I've been practicing and I'm happy they've turned out so well! I try to incorporate the feels in this story a lot as well as the action, so look forward to that! Thanks for the review! :)
action drama firendship love death magic and comic releaf to HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Author's Response:Well, thanks!
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