Hey you're great at adventure scenes, if this was anything to go by. It was great, I could easily picture it as an act in gameplay!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I mean, I wasn't really sure. but hearing you say that boosts my confidence a bit :) This story is going to have more action scenes in it and I wasn't sure if any of them would be good, but now I feel more positive about them.

Thanks again!

Whoaaaa, this is so cool! I can definitely tell it was worth the wait, just by this chapter. It's such a unique spin on the idea of chaos energy. We hardly know anything about it from what's in the games, and I unfortunately don't have access to any of the comics, if they explain it there... It's fun learning other people's takes on it, especially in story form :3
Awesome work, as always! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! It's pretty fun coming up with your own ideas on how Chaos energy works (as long as they're at least somewhat logical), and I'm glad you like my take on it so far! ^_^