Okay first off, this chapter is very sickening and poorly done. One part of my mind tries to focus on one part, but shoots all too fast for the imagination to keep up.

This chapter needs to have some work done. Moving something too fast is bad.

omg he overreacted.

Amy?!?! With a BIKINI WAX?!?!?! Eeeeewwwwww

end of the story eh? ah well. :ponders: interesting. Metal... poor guy. (esp considering the feet) hm... at least they made up a bit. thats good. though how on earth did metsy know bout gerald? meh. good job. :thumbs up:

i luv the whole damn thing!!! ^^

Author's Response: Thanks! That tells me how much people like my writing! At first I thought the foot fetish thing would turn you away, but I was wrong. Thanks ^_^