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Reviews For love triangle

Name: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2007 7:42 PM · For: more troble
interesting


Name: ShadowCats16 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2006 11:06 AM · For: more troble
hey not bad chapters could be longer but all in all not bad


Name: Icestar (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2005 5:57 AM · For: and so it begins
Hm, more of a prologue than a chapter, but nice. Just a bit of advice, try setting out the fic a little differently. If you start a new line everytime a new idea is introduced it will make it easier to read. Anyways, interesting story.


Name: Fatpanda3000 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2005 12:11 PM · For: and so it begins
Its a bit too short, but quite nice. cant wait till the next chapter is online


Name: shadowlover (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2005 11:20 AM · For: and so it begins
That can be a really good story! PLZ do more!


Name: Oblivionhedgehog (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2005 2:56 PM · For: and so it begins
Really short. And you need to use correct poncuation and Grammer. Other then that I liked it . I'll vote untill chapter 2 comes out and see if you took my advice.


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