OMG When I read this, I had skipped to this chapter, thinking it was another story. This chapter was SO GOOD, I had gone back to read the beginning...and saw that the orginal format was script!
You win a special -Biggest Improvement- award for changing your format with chapter 3...now try and go back and redo your first two chapters PLEASE. Specially since the script rule IS in place.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked this chapter =3 and thanks a lot for the award X3 and sure, I'll repost the first two n_n Again, thanks a lot!
YOU UPDATED! Well, it's a good chapter. Nice work. ^^
Author's Response: Yeah ^^; I'm sorry it took so long, but now I'll be updating a bit more often, and thanks a lot =3 I'm glad you like.
interesting. some things could use a bit more emphasis, but good for a first fic. you might want to fix up some of the grammer, a beta would be able to help you. also, maybe put spoken words into " ... " and formatting. sorry to pick at it... -.-;;;
Author's Response: Ah, np, those constrictive critics are what makes the fics better ^^ so, actually, Thanx^^
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