That's so adoarable!! You have to continue this, its so cute!!!

X3 While reading this, I had music playing. By the third or fourth line, the music was still playing, but I was so completely zoned out in your story, that I paid no mind.

During the beginning, even if I tried not to, I paid attention to the grammatical errors, but I just lost interest in that, and your story had all my attention.

The flow hits you at the beginning, and doesn't stop for anything. Even at the end, it leaves you thinking. I applaud you, if my review really even means anything to you.  ^-^

Thanks for the story! ~Miles Prower~

Aw, I really love this story... It's so adorable. I think the way you portrayed Sonic is great. Definetely one of the best slavery fics.

I love it. grammar is good, the storyline os GREAT, keep it up.

Awww! This is both really cute and erotic, without going overboard. Sonic's personality seemed a bit feminine at times, but I think that added to the overall effect of the story; after all, there's something about the Sonic-uke pairing that's just so darn adorable! Great job! ^_^