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You should write another.. though I'm not too sure if you still go on here... lol
And I know, I know! One shot!
Screw that! This was amazing and you have to add on! Don't torture me! And WHOOOOOOOO on Sonic's total Ukè-ness!
You somehow even made him seem...kinda...girly. But I like it! Please! Add on!
Aw, come on, Shadow! Give Sonic a little break and start updating this. I need more! This is good, scratch that, great! There HAS to be more fanfictions like this out there! This was great!
dude..the stuff for my reviews about my story forgive me baby were right but at least its just a story!if it was for real then i wouldnt make the story like that at all ya know!
I wish there was more to this... I dont quite understand whats going on with the whole slave guild and the government. But as incomplete in explanation that might be, it was still a great read.
Awww... That's cute. It's more R-rated sex though (there's no mention of the word penis or semen/cum and you don't describe the "process" of the cum splat or the rubbing tingle). They should run barefoot aroung a field, like in those corny movies.
aw, cute.... that is really adorable. shadows gonna be hunted to the ends of the kingdom though... :sniggers: or maybe not.... depends on how tolerent the people are...
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