continue this its good
Aw, poor Shadow...not.
geez, Sonic's a total chick! XDD
I'm glad he finally whacked that damn monster cuz for a second there I thought he was helpless and yeah.
still with the typos? Itls a good story and you should continue, if you do maybe you should work on your next chappie a bit more, get a beta or collab. with somone.
um, i'm not to sure what's going on but as the story goes on i'm sure i'll catch on.
Spelling errors through out and yeah, other than that it's okay.
:winces: okay, maybe you need to spell check this. It is an interesting chapter, but the typos do annoy me, and makes it harder to concentrate on the fic. also, you could maybe sperate the paragraphs a bit better. keep trying.
cool story. ^_^ Just a few things, typos. It is follow, not fallow, and roar not rore. A beta could fix that up for you. ^_^ But interesting exposition. :thumbs up:
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