why the hey would sonic get upset over this doom guy? i thought he kidnapped sonic and was trying to make him destroy the universe...hmm...

awww more must have mreo MORE DAMMIT.

aww im kind of confused to what was happening at first but what the hell nice work on this story.

I like this...it's interesting...continue soon

Very good, I can see a few spelling errors but then again who dosen't make mistakes. I can't wait to read the next chapter, BTW I love the storyline. I couldn't stop myself I just cracked out into a fullblown giggle fit, when it said shadow lived in a box, i love shadow to death but the image in my head made it seem hilarious

Author's Response: Well, it's nice that someone atleast reviewed this for me! I geuss that Shadow living in a box WOULD be kind of funny... But, again, the story was originally by a ten-year-old, who DOES NOT KNOW ABOUT THIS SITE, SHE'S A GOOD FRIEND OF MY SISTER'S, and she's a GREAT writer! 2nd chapter up by Thursday the lastest, Shadowgirl12!