Oh I'm so sorry for you. I hope everything works out.
On a lighter note, I love this chapter. :D And then the ending kiss... Cliffhanger. >
This rocks!! I can't wait for the next chappie!! XD
I know I reviewed this on FF.net, but I felt like it needed to be said here as well. The story is absolutely fantastic. It's amazing, well-written, and extraordinarily gripping. You honestly know how to weave a fantastic story, and it makes me happy to know that writers as talented as you are writing for this pairing/genre/whatever.
You've done a fantastic job, and you're the one who deserves a pint or a hug. Perhaps at the same time.
Yay..Update!!!
This story is great, please for all that is good don't stop it until it is over.
I like how you show Shadow in this story as more open than usual, but only to Sonic. You manage to go and give him multiple personality's depending on who he is talking to, and you make it work. Especially now with Sally starting to question Shadow's actions around Sonic.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Shadow has a slight obsession building with regards to our fave blue speedster, so he's gonna be more open around him in an attempt to get close. Of course Shads is currently in denial about the entire thing. I actually kinda like Sally, she's smart and she kicks arse, so I'm trying to be fair to her and keep her OC. Glad you like the story so far!
YAY its Sonic 3 all over again.
Author's Response: Sonic 3/Sonic & Knuckles is actually my favourite Sonic game, so it's hardly surprising elements of it turn up here. Heh. Glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for the review.
Wow, amazing chapter. Great job!
Not bad, I like where you are going with this. I must say though that being able to teach me how to use Chaos in this day in age is extremely way past cool! XD
Keep it up!
What is extremely funny is the fact that only a couple of days ago, I just finished the Sonic X portion where Shadow is introduced and all that information about him and the Eclipse Cannon was revealed.
I want to see more of this! Definately a good story so far, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! A friend of mine just gave me a copy of the Sonic X series, so I've been refreshing my memory of it. However, I am mostly working on the Sega game canon rather than Sonic X canon, since I played SA2 well before I ever saw Sonic X, but there's enough similarity for it to work. I update a bit sporadically, since my life is crazy-busy, but I'll have a new chapter as soon as I can. :)
o.o Hey that was a great chapter! Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Feedback always helps speed the writing process!
OMG we must see what happens next! Don't take too long now, dear!
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