Great! The way he goes to a different universe...it reminds me of that other one...I think it was "Born by Darkness Loved by Light." Or something like that.
Good story so far, and very professionally written. If you decide to keep writting this story, then I'll certainly read it. Nice layout, paragraph-wise by the way. (unlike my own story). ^^
Author's Response: thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. There will definately be more on the way - look out for chapter two, soon.
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