I can't wait for the next Chapter!! *whisper* Hope you do good on your exams!! ^ ^

Hey, this is very good! I'm really interested in what is going to hapen next. You left us at a bit of a cliffhanger! I do hope you continue. This is a great plot. What I may suggest though, if you could enter a space after each piece of dialogue, just to separate them a bit. It's seems sort of jumbled when together like that. But otherwise, I do love the story. Good work! I hope you continue soon! :]

I really like this, good work. One little thing that threw me a bit off is your grammar. Try rereading your work two days after typing it, that way your mind won't see something that is not there. Good stroyline!! Later, Mecha

Author's Response: Thankyou for the review! Some people have told me about the grammar problems, so I'll have a look into it! Thanks again :)