I've read your story a couple of times and I like it very much
Author's Response: thanks! when i get posotive reviews, it makes me want to write a chapter!!
DUDE. Grammer. Get a beta reader or something. Spelling's horrible, the story had no real coheshion...you seriously need to spend a LOT of time to writing, butcause this wasn't given much time to revise.
Author's Response: ok! i type fast so...yea..i'm going to start to write all of my stories on word, so that will help alot!
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