that was so cool!!!!!!!!! just try to make it a little longer, and i'll die for your stories!
Very short, but very detailed and wonderful! Now, if you keep it up and write longer passages, you'll be all set!
Dode short but good, did you take my Title name Reborn for your text on "I can feel… being reborn, he thought silently. I’ve been awakened. But I am not free."? >=( but good story
Author's Response: No I didn't take your tittle 4 my text I haven't read any ones stories yet Sorry... do you want me to change it?
this is a good start......
keep going!!!
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