I apologize for not reviewing, I've been... away...
Lets leave it at that...
Anyway, the last 3 chapters where good, but there are a few things.
HOW does Espio have video feeds from all across the city, and in such convineint places?
Also, since Sonic could make it to Rouge's easily, that would mean he vegaly knew where he was when he escaped, right?
And that would have some profound effect on what Shadow does latter on, wouldn't it?
But really, great job!
P.S. That knife thing works, I checked...
Author's Response: he used to work for a detective agency, duh :P he didn't know where he was until he was outside ok? no lol, i wont ask how O_o
Author's Response: THAT RESPONSE MADE SENSE WHEN I MADE IT IN PARAGRAPHS, WHY DOES THIS THING HATE MY PARAGRAPHS?
if you dont update soon im gona find and kill him my self (yes that can be done(Im a Yakuza, we can do anything)thats whay you dont here about tikal any more *shot*)
Author's Response: noooooooooooo, shadow is the only one to have that privilige! (and im sure im spelt that wrong)
Well, he deserves it. >_>; Shadow should kick his ass. xD
I can't wait til the next chapter. x) I really, really love this story.
Author's Response: yes, I agree
Espio MUST die!!! mwhahaha, i want to hear of the most grusome death for him >:K he deserves it that son of a b***
Author's Response: OK, just take a deep breath dear, and, relaaaaaaaax. :P
KILL ESPIO!!! WOO
Author's Response: lol, my reviewers are all crazy
Love it! Sonic finally tells him what happened. Update soon please.
Author's Response: The more reviews the quicker the next chapter comes ^_^
Love it tuely do! Make Espio pay pay BIG time never sould hurt my sonic like that never ohh shadow gonna kill him! If he don't well....! *pulls out knife*
Shadow: 0_o Let me guess you will?
Me: No dip!
Sonic: I LIKE DIP!
Author's Response: DIP! :D Times like this when you wish that you were in Sonic's world and guns were legal, don't you agree? :P But of course children, guns and violence are bad, don't use them, or so help me I'll shoot your brains out! :P
well, well, well...i guess there is hope for Sonic yet xD im glad he escaped though, and i was most shocked to see that shadow wasn't the one that saved him O.o he's stronger than he looks :P
I hope your writing the next chapter as we speak ^.^
Author's Response: indeed, skinny little hedgie isn't he? O_O
I think this is one of my favourite chapters here!! Keep it up!
Author's Response: woo, yay!
Aww, good for Sonic for getting out of there.
I really like your story. x) Update soon. =D
Author's Response: Ty, I will
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