* I hear and obey * Yes! I love you *J.K* Story so awsome love it *gasping for air!* Awsome so cool your awsome and you updated yes in a day I'm so proud *tear and falls to ground*
Shadow: I think she died from shock!
Author's Response: Well, as loyal as you are, there's no way I'm performing CPR o_O
BRAVISSIMA!!!
Author's Response: LOL WOW FOREIGN LANGUAGES!
O.o' i wonder how this story may end now. So many turn of events its rather confusing to know what may happen next.
But i say this in a good way xD everyone loves the unexpected
Author's Response: yay, unexpectedness!
I got ya this time...
First, you didn't explane where Rouge lived, what her home looked like, or anything.
Those are important details.
Second, wouldn't it be easy to escape from Espio while he's asleep?
Even with the knife it would be simple, all you would have to do is bite the thumb, and in those few free seconds, slam the back of you're head into his, then take the knife while he's stunned, and get payback...
Don't ask me how I know that...
Anyway, there are a few other things, but overall...
Nice work.
Author's Response: Oh shush, I don't care about Rouge's house :P and no, I won't ask about the escpaing thing, but I take it it'sn to something you'd usually know, I sure as hell didn't, but, meh, THE STORY WILL BE AS I TELL IT! If he got away it wouldn't be much of a plot now would it?
SUPSENSE! You almost had me breaking my computer! Please never do that again please please please! Computers cost a lot!
Great chapter though hope the next one is longer and less of a wait! I swear you ppl just love to take all the time in the world to update, I hate it but I'm always happy when it happens!
Author's Response: MWAHAHAHAHA! Little did you know, the destruction of all the world's computers is part of ym plan for world domination! *more evil laughter*
ARG!! HOW DARE ESPIO PUT A KNIFE SO SONIC'S NECK!! SHADOW'S GONNA F***ING KILL HIM!!
Author's Response: Lol! *Hides from oncoming exploson of reviewers brain*
Great Story love it I think I'm gonna add you to my favorites!
Author's Response: Ty :)
I HATE ESPIO. e_e;
Kay, just wanted to say that. xD
Nice job. x)
Author's Response: Lol, the feelings mutual, I'm sure ^_^
hehe for some reason i never liked espio ethier 'he's such a bitch sometimes' and this just prooves it. Even though acually liked the fact sonic got raped (im evil, what can i say -.-') i still think it's pretty sick that ESPIO did it >:P eww lol though i HOPE for god's sake shadow comes and well kicks that chameleon's ass in big time! Great work, i hope to see more soon :)
Author's Response: hehe yes yes all in good time
BITCH!!!! U MADE THAT STUPID 'THING' RAPE MY SONNIKU!! YOUR DEAD!!!!
I liked this chapter. poor sonic.. what.. WERE shadow and knux doing? *swiftly moves eyes left and right*
Author's Response: O_O ... please don't kill me! :P
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