...-turns green- HULK KILL!!! -strangles Espio- KILL KILL KILL KILL KILL!!! DIE!!! DIE, DAMMIT!!! -roars- DIE!!! -rips Espio in half- DIE!!! -rips Espio's head off- I NEVER LIKED YOU IN SONIC HEROES ANYWAY, YOU SHOWOFFY SON OF A BITCH!!! AND YOU'RE HORRIBLE AT THE GUITAR!!!
Author's Response: lol, scary reviewer :P
:O Poor Sonic! Twas a good chapter though all other things aside.......
update again soon k?
Author's Response: Yes, poor Sonic
You just LOVE breaking me down, don't ya?
Ok... yeah, you're getting better, and the problems are getting harder to find...
BUT I SHALL NEVER GIVE UP!
NEVER!!!
So... It was a pretty good rape scene, but shouldn't Espio be tired after it?
He just walked away, like nothing happened...
Also, can you really search an entire city in under an hour?
Even at Mach 1?
So remember, no matter how good you get, I will ALWAYS be there to find a problem, and drag it into the light!!!
Nice work...
Author's Response: Oh shush this supposed light these problems get dragged into is about as bright as the light that lighrs up my backgarden when I'm trying to read the hitchiker's galaxy to the galaxy, which, I think you should know, doesn't work, so hah!
Bloody Hell, I got nuthin...
I must say, you're getting pretty damn good, there really isn't much I can say about this one...
But still, I have to say something, so I doved into my nit-picky side... and I still had trouble! But I got sumthin...
How long did Espio vanish to get tie cuffs for?
Any longer than a few seconds, and Sonic could have easily ran off, or at least move if the door was locked...
But I'm just being picky, Great Work!
Author's Response: Mwahahahahaha! I finally got ya! :P Sonic was too bust trying to figure out where he'd gone to think what he was doing so, there you go! *gets out pompoms and cheers* yay!
Author's Response: Sonic wasn't bust he was busy :P, typo
omg! this is awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Cool chapter, can't wait for next.
Author's Response: REVIEW NUMBER TWEEEEEENTY, thanks! :P
Oh, and one more thing, WHY would Espio quit the Chaotix?
He's a ninja... a desk job really doesn't seem to fit him...
But listen, theres something you need to remember, don't rush, take you're time...
I'm a writter, my book is almost done, and it's taken almost a year, so trust me when I tell you, take you're time...
AND trust me when I tell you... Nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, thats why he didnt seem exactly overjoyed at the new job, but it's all coming in good time, but thanks for bringing this stuff up otherwise I'd never noticed, please keep reviewing!
Author's Response: Oh, and by the way I'd love to read your book when it comes out, you'll have to tell me what it's called
Thank you for taking notice of Sonic's arms, it's the little details that matter the most.
Well... I think you pretty much nailed this one, lots of detail, plot advancement...
I really don't have much to say about this chapter except...
Nice job!
But, if i would have to say SOMETHING about this one, is that Espio seems a little... obsessed...
Now, I know you'll exsplain the root of Espio's... feelings, but if he's at the whole "kidnapping" point, why didn't he show up at the hospital?
He just didn't know?
Author's Response: he didn't really know about the hospital, that or by the time he got there him and shadow had already legged it :P but yes he is obsessed, hehe, I just wanted to make him evil ;P thanks for reviewing!
Not bad, not bad at all, once again I'm suprised at your update speed and quality control, nice work.
But... I see a few problems.
First, if both of Sonic's arms are broken, how is he able to move around after just a few days?
When my bro got his arm busted, he couldn't move it and had a cast on for months.
And sure as hell couldn't hug people...
Does he at least have splints on?
But I murt say, nice work.
P.S. I like your exsplanation about Miles's death, but Security would stop drunks before they get in.
Author's Response: Woo, your a brill reviewer ^_^ I put the next chapter up, I hope it more or less answers your question, sorry, ti was the best thing I could come up with, thanks for reviewing!
Never would Have thought Espio was the one to like Sonic. Good story, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yes, it was...unexpected, dundundun!
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