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Name: Rusetassle (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2006 9:24 AM · For: Amy and Espio
:O WOW *glares at espio* thanks for posting a new chapter up xD wooow Sonic has alot of 'stalkers' xD

mwhaha i will wait for the next chapter... as im your: #1 Fan!!! ^.^



Author's Response: Yes poor Sonic :P Crikey, it didn't take you long to read and review it did it? I'll have to make the chapters longer, lol, no 1 fan!


Name: Rusetassle (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2006 8:42 AM · For: Admittance
Now thats what i've been waiting for!! xD aww soo cute xD poor shadow's arm :( you MUST get another chapter up by today!!! hehe

from your obsessive fan - Ruse xD

Author's Response: LOL! I have an obssesive fan! Well, your wish is my command, the next chapter is up, enjoy!


Name: Fire_Sonic (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2006 9:11 PM · For: We don't deserve to hurt
Like the story hope the 4th coom soon =)

Author's Response: Well look at all these reviews, and it's only my first story! How can I not be a good little author and update? To the keyboard!


Name: Flashes_of_evil (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2006 5:00 PM · For: We don't deserve to hurt
It's a really good fic! Keep up with the fast updates mkay? I wanna see what happens!

Author's Response: I will :) Will all these reviews how can't I? I'm working on the fourth chapter right now! :]


Name: Vampiress_Heart_Girl (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2006 4:19 PM · For: Death of a Friend
Great story. Keep going.

Author's Response: Thanks :)


Name: Reko (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2006 1:21 PM · For: Death of a Friend
Another thing, what was Miles doing in that building anyway, and why couldn't he get out before the fire got that intence?
And an fire cuased by an exsplosion would cuasd great strucual damage, and would cuase the building to colapse...
Also, if that was the case, the explosion or the exsplosive would have to be pretty big to cuase the whole building to burn...
Normaly it would only cuase the surrounding floors to go.
Miles is my favorite charecter, if he must die, proper sorting of details ard in order...

Author's Response: Once again, creative critisism I LOVE YOU! :P Yes, it is all going to be explained in good time, all in good time... :)


Name: Reko (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2006 1:07 PM · For: Death of a Friend
Wow, this story seriously suprised me, this is VERY good for a story that updates so quickly...
Most stories that update like this arn't very... good...
But this is really good, it's not perfect, but what is?
In fact, I made this account JUST so I could complament you...
And making an account using a PSP is hard...
Keep up the good work!
P.S. How did Shadow get in the building, and why was he there?
Unless that's being saved for later, that's a detail that should be adressed...
Anyway, nice work...

Author's Response: Awww, I feel really flattered, thankyou ^_^ And yes, all that is coming in the next chapter so don't worry


Name: ChaosRaven (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2006 12:06 PM · For: We don't deserve to hurt
that was really good, cant wait to see more. ^^

Author's Response: TY! ^_^


Name: chaogirl (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2006 10:00 AM · For: We don't deserve to hurt
Man you're fast on the updates. But I love that since I'm craving more of. But poor Tails I loved the cute little fluffball.

Author's Response: yes, in fact the only reason the 4th chapter isnt up already is because the internet went dodgy, but all better now!


Name: Rusetassle (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2006 9:37 AM · For: We don't deserve to hurt
My hero xD lol i was talking about sonic getting hurt earlier xD i knew you would make him bleed *pokes evil author* lol xD i really am enjoying this story... i know you probably have alot of things to do right now but,

I need to know what happens next!! xD
update ASAP

Author's Response: Me? A lot of things to do, lol! How did you think I maanged 3 chapters in 2 days? :P I'll be updating soon, maybe even today, so keep your fingers crossed, and the more reviews, the faste rthe next chapter comes! :P


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