this was a great story the sad parts made me cry and the good parts were exciting but all i can say is that ESPIO IS ADDED TO MY HATE LIST sorry had to add that =3
The story was very well written. You did an excellent job. It's nice to see different sides of Shadow and Sonic.
Awesome~ I loved it, even though I like Espio... but meh someone had to be the bad guy x3
Ill rape your stories naw 8D~ (okay read but rape is so much more fun ^-^)
AWW! i loved it!!! please make a new story PLEASE!
man Espio is a basterd sent stright from hell with him and his color changing skin...eww! he changes colors! well i have to keep reading sooo BYE!
i thought that was an exellent story
NO i acautly thought it was a quiet a good chapter
that was such a great story!!! there was a few spelling mistakes but that didn't throw me off. to me, in a story i dont really care about grammar and crap as long as the story is good. you did a great job for this being your first story. i am adding you to my favs.
this was a great chapter!! the scene with espio was very suspensful and less sickening then the other one.
i liked this chapter better than the last
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