I liked the song... Very sweet
And the fact Tails and Knuckles are a couple. Amy finally left, thank god :P
Great story, every chapter is well thought out ^.^
Author's Response: Yeah, the poem, I am a natural at it. I have been writing poems for a little over a year, and they always seem to plop right into my head. I am thinking of having a book published. Anyway, in order to give the song that spontaneous feeling, I wrote it on the spot. I planned on having a song, but did not give it any thought as to what it should be about, and it came out rather well, much like Sonic's performance.
I LUUUVVVEEEDDD IT!! You even out Shadow in it!
Author's Response: To be honest, did not understand the second half of this. But I am guessing, so yes, I did get Shadow in there. Sadly, due to writers block I cannot remember how in seven hells I was going to end this in like sic chapters. But longer stories have more room for improvement I guess...Damn you writiers block!
Great story! Great Author! Great! Love it keep it up plz!
Author's Response: For once, this guy isn't complaining about lack of updates. And I thank him for encouragment.
Aww :( i've done something like that once... well not exactly like that of course but still. Don't you just hate it when your trying to tell someone something important but they can't hear you due to something else going on in the room.
I love this story, hopefully Sonic will get Shadow back eventually :)
Author's Response: No, I like it. I call it Irony. As for your second comment, he might. But then again, what is a story of mine without some good ol' fashion sex.
Deep. Very deep. I like it alot, hope you post another chapter soon.
Author's Response: I like that. It reminds me of when you stuck up for Rusetassle when I was "Attempting" to give him some contrsuctive Criticm. I thought it was. Anyway, if you thought my review was bad, you should read some of the ones I get.
Please post your next chappie soon!!
Author's Response: .... Okies...but if I rush it, it will suck more than normal. ANd you all will be like: ?_?
so many emotions.... I'm crying and loving this at the same time. I hope you do a next chapter *cries* aww please let it be happier. I swear my heart will break
Author's Response: With a response like this, who could possibly mistake you for a guy!? He he....Yeah...I make fun of people. But...hmmm, are we really people...or are we furries? Or a happy mix of both? Anyway, thanks for reading!
LOVE THIS CHAPTER LOVE IT! COOL STORY KEEP IT UPDATED AND YOUR AWSOME LOVE YAS!
YAY! GORYNESS!! lol! I really liked this chapter.. Heh. YAY! FAT ASS IS DEAD.. erm.. Eggman. Heh. can't wait for the next one! ^^
Author's Response: YAY SOMEONE LIKES GORYNESS! AND SOMONE ELSE CALLS HIM FATASS! I may have him say this now. That he goryly killed fatass or something.... XD
haha total awsomeness!!!! go 'ace' er i mean shadow xD the first chapter was pretty descriptive aswell O.o'
Author's Response: Yeah, a tons of clichés in this book cause its second name is "The wrong way to make any story except a 'fun' story." But "Set me Free" was shorter soooo yeah..... *Cricket* What, I really debated on this! *nothing* Damn...I killed ALL the Crickets....
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