Okay... this story is not good. The conversations are unrealistic. Sonic would not let Shadow fuck him like that. There is no indication of how Shadow fell in love with Sonic, as we all know that Shadow is enemies with Sonic in the game canon. If someone wants to make a believable Sonadow, he or she has to find a way to show how Shadow gets to fall in love with Sonic after being his enemy. I know this is a fan fic but you have to explain why these fictional characters do these things, or else your fic is automatically bad as a Sonic fan fiction and it would be better off written as an original fan fiction. End of story. Also please remember that these are two video game characters, and it's not like they are from Leisure Suit Larry.

Great story! I like how you implied the title at the end.! It was very well written! congrats! ^__^ Koneko

*giggle giggle* That was very COLORFUL vocabulary there. And it was hothothot! ^______^; I like the end the best. I'm a sucker for some sweet-talking romance in yaoi. Not irl...it makes me vomit. o_O; Okay...TMI, I know...>>;