A great story so far! Sally certainly has some person issue to work out.
I can't wait till you update next, your story is absolutly amazing! And I love all the lemons! How you make them so gentle with each other is really beautiful! And when they had angry sex was also tottaly awsome and I really lobed that too! Plez continue writting this story becouse honestly? You just gained your self a fan! Do you mind taking a look at some of my stories? I would be really happy if someone as good as you would read my stuff and if possible give me some feedback? Anywase, plez update soon!!
great story im waiting for your review right now :3
Sooooooo cute!
PS: KILL SALLY GODDAMN IT!
That would be so embarrasing!!1 I cant even imagine that happening to someone... But it's hilarious! Great job! i'm waiting for an update!
alright, rev number two!^^ Wow, I wouldn't have thought Sally to be so mean...well, common bitch syndrome in yaoi fics, no? Anyway, I would really like to see Tails' reaction. will he accept his older brother's orientation? And can we please, please have a flashback of that first meeting? :3
Wow! I'll read the next part as soon as I got my own next chappie up here, but I have to congratulate you already: You can see the effort put in this piece and the descriptions, plot and atmosphere are interesting, to say the least. I felt sorry for Sally, wish Sonic would have treated her a bit nicer - and I wonder how long that love can be kept a secret! ;) And what would happen if anybody else fell in love with Shadow, too - and oooh, can we pretty please get a flashback of their first meeting?! Anyway, great work! Please continue!
ooooh, i wonder what that sally is up to, to be honest I'm never a fan of her *bleh* but nicely done, i hope to see more lol, i just hope they will make it out in time, and sheesh talk about homophobic pepz, well update soon! *thumb up* great job mon ami
Rain
Please update this story. I want to see what happens!
Gah.
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