Your mastery of the characters and your skill in describing events astounds me.

Your writing really is a step above most. After reading this, I feel compelled to start up my writing again. You have restored faith in this Sonadow fan.

I think I read too much sonadow. When Sally burst through the door I got two thoughts: 1: O NO! Poor guys! and 2: YES! There you go you spoiled little heartbreaking brat! Strange.
I thought you had forgotten about this story! I’ve never been so glad to be wrong! And this may sound old but: Please, continue! If you do, nothing gonna stop me from reading it and at least say “Hello” (Can’t criticise) ^ ^’. See ya! ^ ^

Wow. This was an astounding twist that even put dread in my stomach when Sally was turning the knob. Beautiful writing, though it would be weird if the FF tracked them down to the place they might go.... *shudders*

i ehjoy full rounded storys..this means that it has a little of everything. a story...plot..action..and sex. or i could be just a sick bastard lol..anyway this is a great begining..but like i said befor i enjoy your work. i rather enjoy your bepiction of them haveing sex...your very skilled..and you have the most deliouse imagination ^.^ do continue feeding my brain with you lovely stories.

WEE!!!

I really can't wait for the next chappie! ^ ^