Nice Story, it may be short but direct which is good
Author's Response: yey.. ^^
Wonderful! Hope there's another to follow soon!
Author's Response: like a follow-up or just another?
*cries* wow... i went camping to miss this?! geesh, i feel bad -.-'
retard isn't the word used to describe this: adorable is xD why you ask? CAUSE NO ONE DIED... FINALLY A HAPPY ENDING ON HERE!! GOD YOU'VE MADE MY DAY!
Author's Response: lmao!!
Sweeeet....
But really really short, really reallly really really really really really short...
But you get right to the point and let us know straight away whats going on...
Thats good...
Thats very good...
Author's Response: lol... yey.. I'm writing a sadder version in a book and might put it up when im done..
Well it's got a happy ending, right? But good story anyway.
Author's Response: lol..
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