I notice this fic has been up for some time now and I finally decided to read it and I'm glad I did. It's entertaining and interesting! I'm curious to see Shadow's sister's personality and when Shadow and Sonic will make out..I mean oo; yeah. Keep up the good work and update soon! ^^
Author's Response: =D I'm glad you read this too ('coz I'm the author and it makes me pleased when people read my stuff. =D)! ^_^ Hopefully Shadow's sister's personality surprises you! ^_^
Dun, dun, dun!
I thought that was going to happen; hope you update soon. ^^;
Author's Response: =D Ah yes, the capsule being Shadow's sister was sort of a given. I couldn't think of a better way to get her in there, unless she randomly vaporized in, XD! However, I hope that Shadow's sister surprises you!
Eee! Shadow teasing Sonic is so damn KYOOT! The fact that you can make Sonic somewhat submissive to Shadow, yet somehow manage to keep both hedgehogs in character never ceases to impress me... Can't wait to see what happens next! ^.^
Awww, seriously, I hope you update quickly.
This story is extremely interesting; and I want Shadow and Sonic to get together so bad. @_@; I like the suspense it draws, though. :3
Update soon. ^^;
This is just my opinion, but I think you'll know when to put the lemon in. Just keep building the story until you hit that critical moment, then hit us with it like a fish upside the face. ^_~
I really, really like this chapter.
...Probably more than I should. >_>
You're doing a great job; my only regret is that this is a G-rated fic; judging by your writing, I bet you could come up with a killer lemon... *naughty thoughts* ~.^
Author's Response: =D Thank you! One of the beta readers at fanfiction said I should write a lemon, but I don't know if I should wait and make people like 'ARGH! Write it now!!' or just stick it in there and call it a day. But I guarantee that the rating will change! When I figure out what I'm doing... ^_^''
Good chapter. It's got so much of Shadow's emotions in it. I love it!
Good chapter! I absolutely love it! There should be more Sonic and Shadow together in it but it's not my story! It's yours! And I love it!
Not bad...^^
You're good at writing stories!
COOL! I liked the ending...lol...Wow...stupid stuffed up nose...-.-' yeah...sry...neways awesome story...awesome chapter! ^^
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