Perfect, simply perfect. This story is the Crême de la crême and it is simply outstanding. Brilliant and beyond anything I could write. It is held well, and tied together very well. It holds an opening for a continuation, but this would also be a great ending. Lingering, and I just wanna read more.

I did not see any thing smutty about this, and I felt like it was passionate, and it hits a deeper level than most stories of its kind and calibur. The strangest thing about this story, is it holds all the elements of the greatest tales I have read by paid authors. My favourite line is Shadows thought "This, Shadow thought, is the deepest shit I’ve been in since I saw Amy in the shower.

This is the only story/one shot I have ever read that deserves a perfect score.

Author's Response: =D Yay! I'm really glad you like it, I get really worried that my stories suck every aspect of ass before I put them up. -_-'' ^_^ I feel so proud of myself 'cause you wrote such a nice review! Thank you!