Um, I feel like this one got no where. On the other hand, this story is at least getting started. Maybe it is because this seems slower than the previous chapter that I feel stalled in reading this. Again, you ran no tst on the hedgehog like you promised. (See previous review...lol)
still, a good story, I am very interested in reading the next chapter. This is very good.
Author's Response: sorry about the late update.. I have chapter 3 like half written -.-'.. it's saved on my laptop sadly and I havent been able to access it for a while... I am DEFO trying to update this tomorrow and I PROMISE you there are tests in the next chapter... cause I've written one out already... My school work is also catching up with me so this is only making the delays longer... and yet again i repeat.. I cant access my laptop r/n so i can't update tonight.
w00t..
lol, 'twas awesome!~
Author's Response: ^^" lmao Ash
Yay! -claps- I like it! It's really interesting! And I have no clue why anyone would flame it... But if they do, you can always chaos control them into the sun. =D
Update soon!
Author's Response: *blush* Why thank you.. ^^
oooooooh... me REEEEALLY like! and Hi!
Author's Response: WHEEE pab!!! *glomps you* gosh you finally got an account ^^
and this is probably annoying you, jo, so i promise to stop after this one.. lol..
I forgot to say before how much I loove the story so far. ^ ^ Haha.. Rouge was funneh. That evil whore bat.. ^ ^''' Ahem.. ANYWAY... lolyness. (No one can use that word!~! Cept Jo because now I'm going to let her.^ ^) Wonder how the comander will react. *Snicker*
Author's Response: lmfao... no humans exist in this.. it's an AU
oO
O...k? That review creeped me out, Mecha.. lol
Author's Response: lol...and THIS review is short LMAO ^^
How DARE YOU! First, you leave, without telling ANYONE! Or at least telling the site! Then, you make several idiot errors! Ooze wouldn't drain, it would have to be completly liquid or draning would be very slow! And Shadow said he was going to see how many of his abilities were working, but never did! This is sorry! (KIDDING!)
It is great to see you back, and I had to tease you. I don't think I noticed you leaving because it seems everyone bailed on me. (Cept sonadowlover...) This is an interesting start, and apparently this is better than anything I've written lately...(2 reviews for 4 chapter! C'mon!!!) But you have thought of a pretty stable start. 4/4 stars! (I was joking about earlier, I just wanted to poke fun...XDDD)
Author's Response: I'll be honest, lmao.... I'm actually scared of you... ^^" why? and LONG while back you like sent critic reviews for ALL the chapters in a row.. and I couldn't fix them and go back and shiz since i'd have to edit the WHOLE story... so yeah... -.-' but thanks for the review... it's nice to know im not being flamed here...
Author's Response: of course I deleted that story now.. I saved it on my pc and it's basically rotting away ^^"
Author's Response: Ohhhh and his ability things? NEXT CHAPTER! lmao ^^" I've already written half of it out..
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Mineeeeee
Author's Response: *hugs you* ^^ thanks Ash
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