Aw, the shorty, but it's building alright. You had great descriptions and an interesting way to transmit emotion throughout this. Great job.
Author's Response: THANKS!!!
Oh damn....that was an interesting chapter to say the least
Author's Response: I luv the bluntiness of this review. ^ Above is fake words...I know... THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!
awwww!!! poor Sonikku! I feel sorry for him. At the same time..ehh.. why did he HAVE to disappear~! *whines*
Shadow ish a little heatless at times. But it's good to see he's 'in' character. Unlike me who ruis his 'image' by making him fwuffy xD ^^"
I love the fact he has SOME affection towards Sonic.
"Earlier in the evening, Sonic had awoken to the touch of Shadow. His hand, delicately caressing his cheek."
Sadly.. that little moment didn't last long xD lol.. your so evil.
btw, WHERE HAVE YA BEEN?? I missed you ^^
it's been a while since I've heard your on the site.. finally an update! ^^ had my worries you died or something *shifty eyes*
Hehehe *hugs you* welcome back ^^
Author's Response: YEA! HUGS FEEL GOOD!!! *Ahem* About Shadow, well, I think I ruined him myself at times in AAomH so, here, I think I am trying to fix that because he is without a past. Then again, I get to bend Shadow a bit when he DOES have a past because the games only give us "clean slate" Shadow...who he is now... Okay...maybe he is in character... Meh... I have been on the site, shooting down the pathetic stories...(Not that this particulair chapter is much better...) Oh, and I would like to thank God, making me evil and such. I seriously believe he has a twisted sense of humor. :Toothy Grin:
...After rereading it, I like it. Am I correct that Sonic is going to find Shadow? And Tails is dead? Plus, Sonic burned down Tails and his house? I can't believe it, but you wrote this pretty well. Kudos to you, I usually sit for a long time thinking about Tails dying in complete guilt. This time, the flow of the story, for me anyways, was not interrupted at all. I feel bad for poor Tails all the same though. Good work. Totally strange, and odd, but I like it for some reason. O.o Good job. I loved it. This is soon gonna go in my favorites.
Author's Response: AND HOW ON EARTH DID I FORGET TAKASHI!?!!? Well, first off, you are correct with everything above. I think.... Wait, what does "This time" mean? Are you refering to you rereading, or the crappy time frame from An Assassin one? (If you actually want to answer....PM me. I don't want to jack up my review count on something unrelated.) And I think there is a trend with you liking my weirdness. (HINT: I think YOU might be weird too.....)(<-- That "hint" gave it away huh? >.<) So, thank you, and I would suggest reading An Assassin of my Heart too. Oh, and Gaz Zan I think is the one who one the contest. So..... Why not read contest 1? (It was a hit on ALL my posting sites. Thanks Gaz Zan!! (Or whoever one the contest.....))
wow......just....wow.....oddly enough....I liked it
Author's Response: Oddly enough, Yiffstar.com, as a rule hates my submissions. It loves this story (All the chapters.... @_@) But I feel like you guys here hate it. (Cept you Nightshade *hugs* I feel warm and tingly with you around.) On a positive, I decided this would have a good ending.....yes, plenty of angst but a VERY happy ending. Although, no one will believe me cause I am known to end on a gory/sadistic note. (Except when Shadow litterally yells at meet on me for warped oppinions on love...) Anyway, sorry for the LONG wait for nothing. Thanks Nightshade, and yes, I did not like the outcome either, it was .... weird...? Yeah, weird is a good word for it.
ww....i like it
Author's Response: YES!!!
I review! There...I hope I help your self esteem by saying: Once again, you've done it. Congrats. And sorry for your hardships.
Author's Response: I never thought you would become one of my favourite reviewers. (Your new and I dunno.... ^^') Thanks for that, and my self esteem is yelling "I kick ass!" Thanks.
*Raises hand.*I went back and looked at the end of the last chapter lol but yes...it did end on a sick note
Author's Response: Very interesting, could you put you hand down now? lol. Also, did anyone see the beginning of the chapter coming?! LOL!! But, yes, I did go back in time at the start of this chapter. I hope it wasn't too confusing...
wow.....can you say gorefest? I like it *Evil smirk.*
Author's Response: Kay, so I am lazy and went back to respond now...yeah... I love it! As you can/have prob. read, Sonic will find him and I wonder what he'll do?
Oh, wow.
What a way to die. x_x; Creative, but probably mighty painful...
Author's Response: YAY! Peeps listen! I try, this is my planned way of killing someone should anyone hurt my future daughter. (not too soon I hope... ^^') Anyway, thanks for reviewing. (People listen!)
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