awwww, that's so sweet that orpheus would kill himself since black is dead, I love this chapter...

Author's Response: Gee, thanks. I thought no one liked it, 'cause it's sappy and oddly deep for me. Thank you. I think I'm gonna cry. ^^ THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING!

OH, and I forgot. Did you know that people who publicaly discalim Gaydom and publicaly hate gays are about 23% more likely of being gay themselves? Cool huh?!? Also, if someone tries to call other people gay, they are probably trying to hide their own homosexuality, even from themselves. it supports my ending idea huh!?!
Anyway, the story's last three chapters have felt dry with the romance. I just can't feel the passion. The plot is still, remarkably, holding together. THe humor is....well...the work is just down right funny. As for all else, I still like the story. OH, and I don't want another muse. Mine is still undecided what kind of Fursona he is....
(My name is Lawleit.)
... You stole that from Death Note...
(Desu Nöto)
THAT IS JAPANESE FOR DEATH NOTE!!
(Whatever, I am L.)
. . . See . . . he is doing this a lot lately. I think he picked an animal. But it may change soon....

Author's Response: Yeah, my muses ain't romantic. And yes, Black is gay. (Don't tell. He'll kill me.) I didn't say anything. I swear. I hope you have a good time with Lawleit. XD

Author's Response: And I do support your ending. Maybe I can bring Black back thanks to Emerald.... She is a sorceress.... Yes, I have the ending. WHAHAHAHAHA!(MECHA: What, no! That's wrong!) I know, and so aren't you. WHAHAHA!

Author's Response: (TACHAR: Oh, wait, the next chapter is 'Orpheus' Demise'.) Shit. Um.... 'Black's Revival'. There! Ha. Uh, he. (TACHAR: Are you even allowed to put in a fanchar couple, man?) N-no. They're not fanchar. They're fanvillian. HA!

Well, besides the grammar mistakes, you ARE a horrible romance writer. Very funny, but a HORRIBLE romance writer. However, the story is still moving, and funny enough. I enjoyed getting yelled at by Mecha. And....Mecha O's was really funny. The speech was a tad dry here. I would suggest you stopping, and putting yourself in the characters situation. Thank how you would react, then alter your reaction to fit the character. Sorry, a rougher review....

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try it out. Actually, Sonic's responses would be my own stuck in that certain situation. Thanks for the review, and yes I know it sucked. I was waiting for this review. ^^ Thank you for reviewing.

Author's Response: Oh, and I know I suck at romance. ^^ I really, really suck. Learned that in a writing class I took. I can not write romance nor action nor adventure nor... MECHA: Here he goes again. Ignore him. And why? He wasn't ready Mechaknuckles! He just wasn't ready. No, ignore him. >< He's just an insane metal scrap plate that I cherish. He's just mad at you for making me submit this before editing it for the 2nd time. If you read Chap 14, those are my reactions if I killed a guy. O_o MECHA: Still mad. >< Shut up.

I like it....not very long but good

Author's Response: Well, thanks. ^^ I was expecting reviews like THIS STORY SUCKS, DON'T EVER WRITE AGAIN, and stuff. ^^' I guess Fanfiction.net is starting to catch up to me again. And I did do it in ONE SITTING and burned my brain. Thanks for reviewing. XD

"Php." This just plain didn't make sense. I CAUGHT UP! YES! GO me, go me. Anyway, I like the story so far, and I cannot wait for you to continue with it. THe other cool part about this story is the inventive thinking put into it. It is obvious, but not "HEY LOOK! THIS IS SPECIAL" obvious. Keep it coming Takashi!

Author's Response: This is inventive?! Scary.... TAKE THAT, TACHAR! Man, 11 reviews in one night.... You have made my day shoot right out the window. THANK YOU! And I'm glad you caught up, I didn't understand what was happening last chapter either.... Thanks for reviewing (11 times)!