not bad
Author's Response: I disagree, but everyone has their opinions. Okay, I don't feel good, sooo......Thanks of the review, and I'm out of here.
I review I review!! good chappie...bit short yes but still good
Author's Response: Thank you for your donation! ^^ I'm healed! Hoot! Yes, it IS short, but something big is coming up. I mean, it's going to be called ORPHEUS GAINS COMMAND. And no good can come from a title like that. I hope you liked my short, pained chapter about Sonic getting drunk. (Always have had a soft spot for that.) Anyways, THANK YOU FOR DONATING A CURE!!!!!!!!
I like it.....Mecha scares me though...lol
Author's Response: ^^ That's why I like 'im! Heh, heh. Since you reviewed I will tell you the name of future chapters: 9. More Trouble...>< 10. Orpheus Gains Command 11. The Truth Hurts 12. Something Special 13. Unbreakable Bond 14. Rage 15. Orpheus' Demise 16. Stargazing (still questionable) 17. Epilogue XD. Now I don't know if these are going to be the number of chapters, but these things are going to happen. Thanks for reviewin' and oh! Mecha says 'Bye!' ^^
Wow...can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: ..Yeah, that's why it was called Trouble on the Way. Few. ^^' I was expecting horrid reviews today after musical practice....Thank you for no putting in a mean review. (If someone did, I'd go over the edge.) Oooh, and something's gonna happen! Heh, heh! Well, THANK YA FOR REVIEWING!
'I'm a turkey. Gobble, gobble.' that's a good one.
Author's Response: ....^^ Indeed. Indeed.
Aww, hehe, this works much better, kudos to you ^^. Great job thus far. MORE PLZ!
Author's Response: Yay! You're happy! ^^ Good! I will type in between musical rehearsals...Grrr....Stupid OKLAHOMA!...Anyways, THANK YOU!!!!
I like Heaven's Rejects personally but that's just me
Author's Response: Thanks for the responce, I was hoping someone would want to tell me their idea of a title. Yeah....I was leaning towards that one myself...THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING!!!!!!
aw I like this...it's sweet
Author's Response: ...Thank you. ^^ I love putting Muttski in. He just adds to it. Don't cha think? Heh, heh. Sonic's gonna get the surprise of a life time in the next chapter. Someone tells him a certain hedgie likes him. *cough* NiGHTS*cough*
Ooh :3 You have a nice plot bunny going there, I'm looking forward to more chapters in this story ^^
Author's Response: Thanks!^^ You're the first review I've had in my LIFE!! Thank you SOOO much! Even on Netraptor.org I haven't gotten any reviews for ANY story. Thank you so much! I really,truly think I'm going to cry...THANK YOU!!!!!!!
More plz. These chapters are well written, but WAAAAAY too short.
Author's Response: ...-.- I know...It was late, and I was delusional. Heh. ^^' Sorry about the shortness. I had to go somewhere and was very busy. Thanks for the review. Now I really am going to cry!!!!!!!!! Thank you for telling me what I need to improve on.
Author's Response: Also, thank you for being the second review I've read. I am very thankful to be reviewed by such an amazing author. (bows)
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