Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) ·
Date: February 07, 2007 2:45 PM ·
For: Shadow's Pissed, Sonic and Shadow confess their love, and Metal Sonic Dies...
Ooh.....I feel so bad for Mecha, but all the same, it was pretty good. I wonder if the robotic Shadow is going to reprogram Mecha Sonic....Hm, I can't wait for the Epilogue! ^< Good work, keep it, up!
Name: Nightshade (Signed) ·
Date: February 07, 2007 2:00 PM ·
For: Shadow's Pissed, Sonic and Shadow confess their love, and Metal Sonic Dies...
oooooo I hope so I really do
Name: Nightshade (Signed) ·
Date: February 07, 2007 11:43 AM ·
For: Shadow, Help me!!!
O.O I like it so much
Name: Nightshade (Signed) ·
Date: February 07, 2007 11:02 AM ·
For: Time to Call Shadow...
aww...no killy Sonic please write more soon I really like this story
Name: Nightshade (Signed) ·
Date: February 07, 2007 9:36 AM ·
For: Do Not Show Weakness, Sonic...
awwww.....it's so short.....
Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) ·
Date: February 06, 2007 6:15 PM ·
For: The Introduction of Sparks, and seeing Metal Sonic..
^^ Much better! I like this!
Name: Nightshade (Signed) ·
Date: February 06, 2007 12:04 PM ·
For: The Introduction of Sparks, and seeing Metal Sonic..
OOOOO MORE!!!!
Name: Nightshade (Signed) ·
Date: February 06, 2007 8:54 AM ·
For: The beginning of the Madness...
oooo good start
Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) ·
Date: February 05, 2007 5:18 PM ·
For: The beginning of the Madness...
LENGTH, my fellow author! Too short. I like the idea, but two paragraphs just aren't enough. Oh, and maybe a little background might help. This has hit a 4/10 on my list. Try and get it longer, and a bit background to why Mecha wants to torture Sonic. Oh, and Mecha has red pupils. The summary was good. Keep it up! Oh, and sorry for the length, if I had more time, I'd make it shorter.