*crying* I'm so happy Sonic alive and it was a great ending. keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it

This was a cheesy, and rather crappy ending, I will admit. -_- Where's the big bang, the emotional conclusion? You write a wonderful tale, but add no emotion to your ending, nor anything that would spark true interest. It was like a lady on her death bed in a soap opera. She wakes up to find her lover at the last moment. Try some sort of originality. It seems like you were trying to leave the reader with a wondering head, but you only left me with bitter disappointment. You write words for your ending, but no true feeling. Good story, but horrid ending. 3/5 stars over all. Nice job.

Author's Response: OK........Thanks though....

I can find out yer email. It's called 'Contact the Author'. Anyone can do it to ya. Any who, when someone is left out in the rain too long, usually (I've seen it) they feel rather despondent and unfocused unless they are given say...something to heat their body temperature by any means. I don't think Shadow would just get up with a real bad chill and start walking to the hospital.... Then again, he IS the Ultimate Life Form.... *argues with self* Besides that and LENGTH, this is okay. ^^

Author's Response: ^^' Thanks? LOL

aww it's so sad*sniffles.*

Author's Response: ^^' Glad you like it

It's like I can almost feel his pain. (Almost.) Great chapter and story.

Author's Response: He's just very sad with leaving Sonic. Thank you for the comment