Oh no! I hope the delivery goes smoothly...and this evil Amy you have concocted goes to hell! The chapter flowed well enough for me. A little more description wouldn't hurt though.
Author's Response: ^^' I'm trying.
good work
Author's Response: :) Thank you
hey where are you going to make the next chapter.
Author's Response: Soon...I have to think alittle.
oh man i wounder what will happen next please hurry and make more amd when are you going to make another chapter for sonic and shadow take it up a notch.
Author's Response: Um..OK. :D
'Amy didn't greet back, nor smile. She did though smile, but it was small.' You said she didn't smile. A few spelling mistakes, a few grammar, but that's it. Nice job. Something's going to happen soon.... Can't wait to see what the party's going to be like.
Author's Response: Sorry. ^^; Sorry If I confused you guys.
i love it! please hurry and make more.
Author's Response: YAY! Finally someone talks. OK.
...Didn't you already describe their first kiss? Nice chapter, besides that fact. Don't invite Amy, guys! NO! ...On second thought, YES! I want to KILL this Amy!
Author's Response: Um. I don't think I did.
Doing good. Nice chapter. Poor guys. I can not see them raising twins without EXTREME stress. >
Author's Response: Yah.
say you don't mind if i try to make a comic for this story.
Author's Response: Sure. I don't care. ^^
Author's Response: Will you submit it to here?
this is getting real good.
Author's Response: --'
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