Nice twist! I thought Shads was going to take charge instead of Sonic, but it was Sonic who was in charge! :D
Aww. The last sentence was so sad. :(
I have only one thing to say...cold medicine and orange juice do not mix! I know this for a fact because I tried it.
Other than this small portion eating me away, you did good :)
Awwwwww juicy lemon...me like it!
Hm... Lemon. I knew that was going to happen. 'Tis is what we come here for. XD Good job.
Author's Response: Lol, Thanks!
...I must say...I do like the taste of lemons.
Ha! Nice job on that. I've been wondering where this was headed, and I enjoyed it.
Good job.
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you liked it. There's still another chapter or two.. Kinda off to end it on a lemon.. XP
ohhhh! i wounder what's the part going to be like.hurry and make more.
Poor Shads...broke his arm. I like the separator. :P This story is getting good. It's also good to know I won't have to make a gravestone for ya. Hm... I wonder what's going to happen at Club Rouge....
Author's Response: Lol, hehehe.. Yea, I'm happy with my M&M's.. Lol, you just gotta wait and find out.. XP
AAWWW
Kawaii Kawaii Kawaii!!!
I bet I spelt it wrong too! *pouts*
Author's Response: Hehe, nah.. it's right. And thanks. ^ ^
"I could be YOUR blankey Shadow"
LOLZ
awww though. really cute so far.. xp
just HAD to review this chapter.. it's adorable!
Author's Response: Hehe, isn't it?
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