Oh my. That was just.....wow. Superbly written and absolutely delicious... I friggen loved every moment of this story! Especially the seriously amazing way that you wrote it!
I have never read a story that was written in this way. I absolutely LOVE it! Simply fantastic! I love the detail you put into it, I can see it play through my mind like a show. You are a wonderful writer!
Wow, this is one of the most amazing lemons I have ever read. The way you describe what is happening and everything, not to mention it is incredibly hot!
Hope to read more from you soon! ^^
It's you! Yay!
Sorry, you won't know me but I'm a big fan of your work on DeviantART and it's great to see you're as talented at writing as you are drawing! This story is brilliant, I hope you post more stuff here! Exclamation marks are my friends! Sorry!
This is really great. I finally see a Sonadow fic with Sonic turning out on top. Many of the Sonadow fics on here that actually say 'Sonic X Shadow' are actually skewed and have Shadow the dominant. I don't really like Shadow as the dominant one, which is why I love this one so much.
Seriously! This is awesome. You're a great writer! Wonderful job!!
heh, that was so cute and even funny! :D aren't you around on deviantart, too...?
HA!!! XD that was hot.
do u have a snd chap. in mind?
OMG!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A lil hard for me to follow at first but then easy I LOVE THIS STORY!!
I like it
Such an awesome read! I could feel the intensity of Shadow's reactions to the new experience. I just wish it was longer! A+++++ :D
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