NO!! *cries* I wanted to read more. It was a good chap. ^_^
Aww, wow.
That's a bitch. x_x; 'Just a job'.
A way with words. xD
Good chapter, poor Sonic.
Man, am I a happy hedgehog. This chapter was good. Nice to know you're on a buzz.
aww I'm liking this plz continue soon
This was good. Great length, and I don't see anything too major that's wrong with it. Wonderful descriptions, and (I may say this a talent of yours) powerful emotion. Keep it up.
oooooo more more I like this!!!!
This story is so sad; but I know that there will be hope for the future! I can't wait for you to continue! I think you're an absolutely fantastic writer! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will update! I'm busy on a Pirates of the Caribbean/Sonadow crossover. I saw Pirates of the Caribbean 3 on Thursday and have had a buzz for the longest time.
ooo continue soon I like it
Author's Response: I will! ASAP!
lyke, omg, wtf? Man... I have a few things to say... THAT... was a really cool chapter.. DAMN YOU FOR NOT MAKING ANOTHER YET.. -Grabs spear, ready to stab you.- Write.. Another.. Chappeh!
Author's Response: I will I will. Thanks man
Author's Response: -runs from spear- Eep! I will I will, I surrender!
Sonic wouldn't have delicate skin if he had been captured by Hellfire a long time ago. Only thing I see here besides LENGTH. Have at least 1,000 words, I suggest to you. Wonderful emotion to bring into the beginning, though.
Author's Response: True..I made a mistake on that part..Skin should strengthen after awhile. As for length is my biggest struggle. I will work on both thanks! Anything else?
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