Oh, wow.
I -love- this story. This is really nicely written; I like Sonic's anger towards the end. It's nice to see him out of his friendly state.
And Shadow needs to get that pole out of his ass. ._.; xD
Update soon. x)

I found this chapter very interesting and beg you to continue..I only ask for one thing..explain how he got the disease after awhile..

I can't really write a long review cause well not much is wrong with it..You fit alot of emotion into one peice.

Great job! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your encouragment and advice! I really appreciate it! I almost idolize you because you're one of my favorite authors here. Again, thank you so much! I will try and get the next chapter up as soon as possible!

Hm.... An unexpected twist. I don't know how you can get a disease from the cold, pneumonia, maybe, though. Besides that one thing I do not quite understand, this is pretty good. You put in nice emotion to the piece.

I'd have to agree with ShadowandSonic. Don't rush the relationship, just to warn you if you consider it. A tiny bit too short for my tastes, but it's interesting. You're doing an okay job so far. Keep it up.

Wonderful story, I did not find many things wrong with it, you're a great writer and should continue. You have made it on my 'Favorite Stories'. Thats a big accomplishment. Please continue and don't let down your fans.

Okay I just remembered something right now. In the following paragraph:

He wasn’t exactly sure what made him turn around and run back. He wasn’t even sure what led him to the exact spot where the onyx hedgehog he was thinking of earlier was. He didn’t even know what came over him and made him pick up the unconscious hedgehog. He wasn’t sure if it was him in his right mind at all when he took him to his own apartment.

You used 'He wasn't even sure' and 'he didn't even know', way too often. Slow down and take time to think how you could fix it.

Things I like about this story is alot. I loved how you started it off, it really drew me into it. I loved how you kept at their fighting and did not rush the 'relationship'.

DO NOT RUSH THE RELATIONSHIP IN FUTURE CHAPTERS!!

I have read plenty of stories that they hate each other and then love each other. Make it realistic, take time for the feelings to grow.

Overall this is a great plot so I must say one final thing:

Great Job! Please Update!