Oh man! I laughed so hard I cried. That little piece of fluff is soo damnable too! Where in his brain did Gerald decide to put a cute little tuft of fur on such a lethal being!? Probably Maria's idea.
Absolutely suberb, and very funny. I can see why Sonic would have a problem with that.
Nice work
Regards
0_o...You...Have a...How do you say? Damned mind...(In a good way) I like the part where you made Shadow say "You wanna touch it?" And RIGHT after reading that, I looked away from the screen, messed with my hair, face palmed again and again. Finally, I turned back to the screen calmly, and kept on reading. My sister was right next to me, so she just stared at me weirdly. It was pretty uncomfortable...But you did a good job on it!
I love this there should be a sequal
Yep. I'll echo the other reviewers and tell you it was brill. You're awesome!
Fffffff. Your writing cracked me up. Nice job.
lol nice one.
I love it! I thought it was soooo funny I had to go back and read it again straight away!
These are my most favourite lines:
‘’And the chest fur sat there innocently like nothing was going on! Well, Sonic would show that chest fur…’’
‘’If Sonic died and went to heaven, God would be making fun of him for it.’’
‘’‘I was trying not to jump your fur?’’’
‘’How did Sonic always end up making himself look like a fool in front of the fur– er… Shadow?’’
wheeeee! gotta love that chest fur, I *love* writing and reading about it.^^
very cool and funny story!
wheeeee! gotta love that chest fur, I *love* writing and reading about it.^^
very cool and funny story!
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