Yeah it shoulda been longer but it was still good
Author's Response: Thanx! I'll try to make my next fic longer =D
Would you love a guy who broke your wrists?
Author's Response: Well, yes if it was true love, I suppose.
Cheesy, but I liked it. That was an unexpected twist to the end. Heh. This was pretty good for your first sonadow. I hope to see more from ya. ^^
Author's Response: Don't worry! I'm bound to put up another =D
wow....Sonic's scary....and I always make Shadow the scary one....eep! update soon
Scary! O_O Poor Shadow! Any who, nice length! And great descriptions. The emotion was wonderful...and disturbing. Keep it up.
Now this is descriptive. And Sonic is crazy! YAY! Nice writing, and I can't wait until the length comes.
I read and now I review.....UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Can you respond with the link to the commericial? Great Chapter! Love it!
Author's Response: Glad to hear you enjoyed it! I appreciate that! Sadly, I can't create a link. My computer's retarded. All you have 2 do is type in Shadow's Myspace Commercial on the search bar on YouTube! It should be the very first video!
Try longer chapters, I suggest. And add more emotion to Sonic's insane obsession. (Ya all gotta love the insanity. XD) 'My feelings for him grew heavier and heavier' Describe how they got heavier. 'sides that, this is an interesting story.
Author's Response: Chapter 3 will be way longer! But, describing is hard and I'm lazy, but, ok, I'll still try! Anyways, thanks a bunch for your suggestions!
Well I did get confused a bit because it would help to point out what P.O.V. you're in but otherwise I think it was good and I can't wait for the next part
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