Aww...I wanna read more of this...*pouts.*I liked it
Author's Response: You LIKED it... Awwwwwwwwww~ *sniffles* lmao~ JK!! Thanks dw i'll keep updating once I get enough reviews lmao
Wonderful story..it had great emotion and I read it over at least five times. And only found one mistake. That is, you didn't describe Shadow in the beginning. Its a comman mistake but other than that its great. Please update. ShadowandSonic love this story.
Author's Response: lol thanks. Yeah I know I didn't discribe him first I caught that as well but it was an rp and well when I brought him into the story *since I was Shadow and Jack.. ANd the man and the girl* -.-'''' Things slip sometimes but I did my best so Meh.. Just glad u enjoyed it ^^ Thnx for da review~
YAY! I wanna (try to) make you happy! Great chapter. You and Teddy had wonderful descriptions and beautiful emotion. I can't wait for the rest of it. ^^
Author's Response: LoL thanks~ You seem to always lik my stories (and I guess now even the rpies) Yeah on this I was Shadow (I usually am lol) Me and Teddy made up though (she saw what I wrote ^^") We had a fight and since then we were just scared to talk to each other adn ask to rp but now we are good lol Thank you for the review!!
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