awwww!!it's SO cute!I love how you described the way shadow's eyes looked!
but i think you could have gave a little bit more detail then sonic just kissing him and saying he loved him...like maybe you could've put sonic saying how he truely feels and like how he has always loved shadow or something like that...i don't know...
This is a very good story!!! I love it!!! Did you know I read the whole thing out loud?!!!!
Author's Response: LOL You must of loved it then.
Oooh. You just hit a pet peev of mine. >< Drawer. NO. I always correct people who say it to me. It's artist of illustrator. He is not a drawer. You put socks in a drawer. Any who, AWESOME story. This is a totally cool one-shot. I enjoy how you speak of the needing and wanting of there to be something within Shadow's eyes. This had great emotion. ^^
Author's Response: ^^ Thank you. Most of my stories aren't complete so I wanted at least one of them complete.
Tell me how eyes shine with 'love'. I wanna know xD
Author's Response: They glissen with understanding when Sonic told his feelings and they shined with love for him. XD
Aww I like it...it was quick but sweet
Author's Response: :) Thank you
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