That was hawt :)
I loved it!

Well, well, well… look what we have here. If it isn’t another ‘wonderful’ piece from the grand author Mechaknucles… and a work created for me, no less. I’ve been meaning to do this for quite some time… and you’ve been having this coming for even longer. There will be no niceties, there will be no mercy… I am going to tear this story limb from fucking limb.
Let’s start at the beginning, shall we? This frightful endeavor begins with a more than vague opening. Vagueness quickly dissolves into repudiation as tid-bits about Sonic are repeated over and over again with no variation in form or design. There must have been a better way to express the ideas about Sonic. And Rouge, what exactly is she doing again, releasing Clones to see if they’ll get busy? Why? For shits and giggles?
How exactly did she get access to these clones anyway? Is there like an army of Shadow clones just lying around that Robotnick lets anyone use!? But moving on, there are apparently hundreds of clones in stasis at Robotnick’s base, so why hasn’t HE used them? He could take over the fucking world! But you know, lets just forget about logic, because logic is for pussies.
Okay… clones, smiles, SONIC! What the fuck? No mention of a transition, no visual cue that says, “Hey, we’re over here now!” Disgraceful. Alright then, we quickly learn that he was masturbating out in the open, sure, whatever. He’s calm, he’s relaxed, he’s looking at a poorly described sun. But then…
OMGWTFBBQRICARDOMONTABON! He’s somewhere the fuck else! How? Why? Who? And he doesn’t even notice? What the hell? Has all the jacking off gotten to his head? There are three Shadows there waiting for him, and of course, they call him faker… you do know that Sonic was the one that called Shadow that, not the other way around, right? And let’s forget how unoriginal that statement is… only three?
There were fucking hundreds, and now only three? Why mention all the others if only three are going to be used? Seems pretty damn pointless to me. Okay, so Rouge ported him somewhere, somehow, and now she’s… somewhere else in the room? Where the hell is she? There is no indication, no cue as to where she is. NOTHING! And where the hell is Robotnick!? He should be blowing the fuck out of everyone by now! Anyway... Rouge is in mystery control room #3, when Shadow comes and beats the shit out of her.
HOW COULD SHE NOT HAVE SEEN THIS COMING!? She gets a bunch of Shadows together against their will, gives herself no apparent form of protection, and does NOT expect to get knocked the fuck out?! Oh, and let’s not talk about the blatant misuse of grammar on Shadow’s speech during this particular event.
And why would the real Shadow even be there? There’s no reason! No way he could have known! WHAT IN THE FUCK IS GOING ON!? Is he physic!?
Okay, Rouge is down, and all of a sudden Sonic sees the three Shadows, and his first thought? “HORNY!” Shouldn’t there be concern or curiosity? Apparently Not. And guess what the Shadow’s response is? “HORNIER!” I completely fail to see any reason or logic for any of this behavior. But like I said, logic is for pussies.
Okay then, the clones want to jump Sonic’s bone, you made that completely clear. Aright, so they get in, they start doin’ their thing, Sonic’s a mess, and pretty soon… Wait, what the hell happened to Rouge? Did they just forget about her? Clones must have short attention spans. Anyway, the following is of course, a sub-standard lemon, with clear lacking in the aspects of emotion, depth, reasoning, and of course, logic.
Then Sonic gets boinked from every-which-way, once again a poorly constructed lemon with completely inadequate base necessities. It lasts like, two paragraphs, with confused and jumbled descriptions lacking focus or direction. The expected events occur, and god Damnit it’s just boring!
And yeah, yeah, they all climax and of course he settles in with the one who he somehow knows is the original, even though he had no signs of knowing earlier. They all love each other, and they all live happily ever after. The End.
WHAT THE FUCK MAN!? THAT’S HOW IT ENDS!? Surly you could have come up with something better than that, ANYTHING would have been better than that! The entire story was a P.O.S., there was no background reasons as to why Sonic so eager to get boned! And why was Shadow attracted anyway? And even if he was attracted, why would his clones be?
There are so many plot holes, so many anomalies, so many horribly bouts of story writing that I can barley fathom how someone like you could write this! I don’t get it! When I said “Clone”, this is NOT what I had in mind. You should have made ME write it, it would have been fucking great if I wrote it!
Well… we’re at our closing statements. I believe I’ve summed up everything that needs to be said… this story blows. I have no constructive criticism, no words of wisdom, you can do better then this. This is terrible… This isn’t even good enough to be smut! There’s nothing here! This is awful!
I’m sure you’ll have a few choice words for me when we speak further in private, but let the record show that ‘Clone’… is a piece of trash.
Have a nice day.


Author's Response: *Has never laughed so hard in my life.* I never promised a *good* fanfiction. The fact that "Shadow the Hedgehog: The Continued Ending" is a decent short story was pure fluke. *laughs.* Well, at last, I get a review from the one person on the site who doesn't have a smut story. Well, later. *Laughs as I walk away*

wow..very well written and I think WoW pretty much sums up the rest.

Author's Response: Thanks for the wow... Your new... YAY FOR ME! You have a fic up, I am going to go torture you, excuse me... BTW, I hope that is a good wow, and thanks for the "very well written" comment, I rarely get that one. Most are just happy with smut. ^_^