OMG... Now i am not hungry anymore... XD
Holy crap this is amazing.
I literally made an account JUST to commend you on this amazing piece of work.
I heard you mention a sequel in a previous comment, this BETTER come out, or I will send my ninja army after you!
Absolutely amazing, I definitely was not expecting the twist with Rudy, and I really liked the character development.
10/10
Author's Response: I wish I had seen this sooner so that I could have replied earlier. You made an account just to comment? That's really awesome! ^_^ As for the sequel, don't worry as I do have one in preparation. It won't be released until the completion of the story I'm currently working on, but I already started working on the chapters for the Damages Prequel in the meantime. I absolutely enjoyed reading your review as I wasn't expecting for Rudy's future myself. 10/10? Yay! Thanks for reviewing and rating!!! Don't send the ninjas! Noooo!
Author's Response: I wish I had seen this sooner so that I could have replied earlier. You made an account just to comment? That's really awesome! ^_^ As for the sequel, don't worry as I do have one in preparation. It won't be released until the completion of the story I'm currently working on, but I already started working on the chapters for the Damages Sequel in the meantime. I absolutely enjoyed reading your review as I wasn't expecting for Rudy's future myself. 10/10? Yay! Thanks for reviewing and rating!!! Don't send the ninjas! Noooo!
I must say, this is the most...gruesome?...no that's not the right word.... Well, I'm a medical student and I watch the medical channel and read medical and murder mysteries for fun, but never had I felt so squeemish from such a descriptive zeal of gore.
I knew Silver wouldn't have worked for Shadow unless he loved him, and my goodness I never thought I would feel sorry for a pedo. Just know I have it permanently stamped in my mind that Rudy was falsely accused, and you, the author can't say anything about it.
May I also say I loved the small touches of humor you did put in to ease a tiny bit of the tension. Oh, and I bet Sonic would love the mother who brought the evidence in, with her need of speed and such. I also love how her first worry was about Sonic being butt-raped in prison, not the possibility of a death penalty...just like Sonic.
To conclude, I love the character development and the whole plot. I read this story from beginning to end, and not to sorry that I decided to finish this instead of going to bed four hours ago and now would be lucky to get an hour of sleep before work tommorow...I mean today. Keep on writing, because we all know you have a talent for it.
Author's Response: *mouth drop* I have to say, your review is by far the best I have ever laid eyes on. I love how you commended on pretty much the whole storyline! Don't worry, you're not the only Rudy fan who's against what I put in. I thank you for taking your time in typing all of this because these comments big or small make all the difference in me deciding to put my fingers oin the keyboard or not. Yeah, the funny scenes were for what movie makers call, 'comic relief' and add a spice to the whole dramatization. It brings me great joy that you enjoyed reading this as much as I possibly have. Just wait for the sequel! *wink*
Wow... I read through this entire series, and I was just amazed with the end. Very greatstory, lots of tension created. Now I feel like writing my own sonadow story.
Author's Response: Really?! That's wonderful! I remember the story that first got me into writing. The fact that the Damages Series had that impact on you just blows me away! I am very happy to see you've enjoyed my hard work. For being the incredible reviewer that you are, you get *STAMPED* APPROVED! with a smilie face sticker!
Hey, are you ever going to update? I really would like to read more.
Author's Response: YES! I am! but I have been busy lately and no one has been reviewing since my last post so i'm like, "Is anyone reading this?" so yeah, now that I know, I'll get straight to it. It's just that I've been working on the only story that hasn't been updated yet. (besides this one) but it's coming. *STAMPED* APPROVED!
I love this story, even if it is a little dark and for some reason i actually want Sonic to give in to Shadow...anyway i Can't wait for the next chapter =D
Author's Response: I love it too! But even the ending will shock me because even i don't know what the result will be! haha. Thanks for the review and your opinion. Fully appreciated! *STAMPED* APPROVED!
Why do I want to keep reading this? This is actually a decent story, and I just couldn't get it off of my mind for awhile. There have been some grammatical mistakes that could've been seen with a careful look over, but that is to be expected in anyone's case since no one is perfect, not even myself.
Still though... please keep writing. I would like to see more ^^
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the inspiring review. After writing the last lines, I forgot to spell check it. But thanks for telling me of your interest. *STAMPED* APPROVED!
Wow, why can't Shadow be nice and act like he did when playing gutiar hero with Sonic? Poor Sonic.
Author's Response: He didn't want to show off weakness I suppose. I'm not sure. Thanks to reviewing though. *STAMPED* APPROVED!
My my I'm crying over a rapist...*Sniffle* WHY WHY RUDY WHY!?...Anyway all drama aside I loved this chapter the cliffhanger at the end really had me throwing my graphic's tablet at the screen in anger/frustration at leaving me in suspense -_-U but your story I've followed since the beginning and I absolutely love it, you deserve retribution! * Stamps " APPROVED" on your forehead this time :p* Peace out
Author's Response: ouch. that hurt. hehe thankyou so much for your feedback it's really appreciated. I love that people like my work. It makes me really happy. *stamos you* hah APPROVED
Rudy? RUDY? Noooooooo! We've lost him. I'm going to cry. ...For a rapist. O_o Wow. Just, wow. Uh... Good torture scene, though, and man, Shadow is creepy. Poor Rudy (the pedo). Shadow had no right to do something that drastic. (But, he's a psycho, whatcha gonna do?) And you had to remind us of precious Scourge. Man, this was a weep-athon mixed with a dosage of horror beyond the sane amount. You are truly amazing, buddy. And a good cliffhanger ending. Brilliant.
Author's Response: i laughed through this whole thing because i love te madness. MUHAHAHAHAHA! Shadow is a psycho. (at least in my writing) i like ur metaphor for this chapter. Thankyou. :D *stamped* APPROVED *puts a ribbon on it* hehe
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