(Stupid comp won't lemme review on last chap.) Beginning was a real clincher. I love it. And Sonic's severe trauma moment? Genius! Spectacular. Silver's part is interesting and a twist. I hope he's okay. Points for that. And Shadow is one sick monster, as usual. Obsessive to the end. Speaking of which, great ending in general. Last line was perfect. But--poor Rudy! I'm crying rivers of blood here. He's uber doomed. D: No suggestions, awesome-ness!
Author's Response: really? cuz i wrote the ending as i was falling asleep. I thought it was going to be horrible. Guess I work better when I'm half awake. *stamped* APPROVED! oh, btw, at least you'll have eyes to cry with. *wink*
Oh my gosh! Grayson's DEAD?!?!
Author's Response: yep *stamped* APPROVED
The thing I love about this story is that it's ssssoooo long I never get tired of reading It you get Into so much detail It's like I'm watching It as a Movie! xD can't wait to see what happens next! :D
Author's Response: oh wow! thankyou for the review. I have always aimed for doing that! *bows down* thankyou sooooo much. *stamped* APPROVED *adds smilie face*
I've been reading your story since it started and i love it but I've got to admit i lost a little bit of interest when you stopped doing the flashbacks of the abuse part it seemed to be the only Sonadow in it but anyway great chapter and i cant wait for the next part and i really feel sorry for shadow for some reason (Damn you rudy)
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. I'm trying to stick to the sonadow curriculum by decreasing the romance between Sonic and Rudy. Those flashbacks will return though, actually, in the next chapter as I know of for now... *stamp* Comment Approved!
*sniff* I don't know why but I'm feelin bad for shadow even tho he put sonic through so much *sniff* *sniff* It's like a sweet side of him he realized he never had!!! ~waah! I don't like rudy he makes me feel jealouse for shadow for him being with sonic!~ :( I hope sonic can ever forgive shadow....anyways! keep going plz! :)
Author's Response: Haha! Yeah, I've realized writing this chapter that the secrets are being revealed and that Shadow really isn't as bad if you look from his point of view. It's important to know what their opinions are. *stamp* Approved
Awesome! It's good to see you're back in writing. It was a well written chapter. No suggestions. I greatly enjoyed it. ^^
Author's Response: why thankyou my dearest friend. Yeah, i'm back! THANKYOU! *stamps* your comment is approved
Unfortunatley, My computer deleted my work that was suppose to be posted a month ago. So, I have to start from scratch. The story will be more different becuase I can't remmebember how it went and so if you want to check on it's progress before i post it here, go to freewebs.com/thediaryofizzo and click Damages on the navigation bar. It will be labeled as diffrerent chapters but I'll mush it to one here.
People's i know I'm tsking forever, but my life has been full of things to do. Also, there have been some points that I have not made, such as, I cannot think of what to write. I eventually ask random people for help, (like my lil' bro) and my friends who don't even know why I'm asking. I'm around 70% complete. I will squeeze in every second from now on, to writing this story that has taken forever!
There has been an inconvience with my Word Processor that it deleted all the work I had done since 5 A.M. to 8:55 A.M. nearly 20%. Because of this, i will have to rewrite everything I've lost. I'll try to get as much as I can possible today and hopefully have the last chapter done soon. Right now, I have 40% complete, before it was gone, I had nearly 60% complete. I apologize for my computer being a nuisance.
If your ideas die, I'll just whack you with a stick again. :P Man, you told me this was long and awesome, but.... This far exceeds anything I could have believed. For one, your sentence structure is magnificent. I love your narrative voice. Characterization was well thought out too. That "female scream" thing was a riot, I will admit.
I know you've been having a touch time with this chapter and all, but I still feel bad for Rudy.... Oh well, I'll get over it. After all, he'll die soon. >D Any who, brilliant chapter with (as usual) simply amazing emotion. Keep up the fantastic work. ^^ I'm quite interested with how you're going to put this to a close.
Author's Response: Thanks friend. I never said it was awesome, I said it was long. But thankz anyways. Your comment is approved! :D
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